30th March - Article proof reading

Matt L and I also wanted to proof read the article once more before handing it in, and as we had looked at it so much and would be less likely to notice little mistakes, we asked kirk to look through the article, (shown below) and give us some proof reading comments. This will help us further on our article and will make sure it is checked through thoroughly.

Here you can see kirk looking through our article.

Here you can see him giving us feedback with the original article he added comments to.

Here you can see a close up of the feedback.

Here you can see the article with all of kirks comments.