Article feedback for Tim

I also gave Tim some feedback for his article for homework. I thought overall it was good, contained an interesting and new game which simultaneously would teach the gamer as well as letting them find out a new game.

Here is my feedback for Tim.

Tim was quite stuck with ways to link it to the exam, so I helped him with 3 aspects of the exam he could link it to, as you can see from my above notes. These aspects were:

1) Postmodernism

2) Media in the online age

3) Media and collective identity

Hopefully, this should help him in developing his article and I hope that he thinks the feedback is constructive.