Reflection from Mike's feedback

Here is some reflection feedback which Mike has given me for my blog so far:

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- Make sure that all your blog posts fit onto the one page, you can do this on the settings.

- Explain briefly what the job roles involve

- Include a screengrab of your twitter page

- You could give a brief intro to the keynote presentation

- Flatpack design images from Dave's session missing?

- Today's notes

This is good stuff so far with good images / evidence.

Overall, I think this is very helpful feedback which will help me in the long run to sort my blog out and change whatever is necessary. I think all the points made are relevant, especially the intro to the keynote presentation, the brief explanation of jobs and the screen grab of my twitter page.

I think this will all help me with my blog work in terms of evidence and reflection. Another thing I noticed was although Dave in his session drew a rough explanation of the flat plan, I did not take a picture of this or draw my own flat plan to upload to the blog, I simply explained what this was and thought it was appropriate. Obviously, a visual image of the flat plan would help considerably.